My first novel. Forbidden bloodline is a quality novel that mixes mages, bloodlines, and weapons. Although the bloodline uses in battle for some people might come later, you're going to love it. As for world-building, it looks ancient but the presence of mages increased technological advancement. So, in any modern technology, blame the mages and not the author✌️✌️✌️.Talking about the character design, I try to develop them with the plot. Excess dumping of information might slow the plot.
Blackcape001
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LIKEIs the main character portrayed as cold-hearted, and are there any annoying side characters who tend to be overly intrusive and disrupt the main character's peace? I generally lean towards stories where the main character prefers solitude and avoids bothersome individuals.
Blackcape001:No
He prefers solitude, but there are some times when he would have no choice but to interact with...well annoying people. But not everybody is annoying. I never loved annoying people in the first place.
The_Last_Native:Is the main character portrayed as cold-hearted, and are there any annoying side characters who tend to be overly intrusive and disrupt the main character's peace? I generally lean towards stories where the main character prefers solitude and avoids bothersome individuals.