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AinzO0alGown
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Alright I shall sacrifice myself Wish me luck

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Fourth Scourge of Star Wars

Sean_Morabito

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RatedOverr
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Is there romance. if yes is it harem and who are is the love interest(s)?

Sean_Morabito:It's basically a Kingdom Building novel using technology from other universes (In the desc) with a mothership from Homeworld starting at Endor working his way to the top fighting pirates, the republic m, the empire and so on. Many MANY space battles with fleets and land battles. Basically think of the clone wars its like that show. The mc joins the confederate side so he is an enemy of the Republic/Jedi while turning to the dark side so Villian mc.
BlaizStorm
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AinzO0alGown
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I red the first 4 ,grammars good,its's kinda slow paced so in terms of plot I can't judge it right now. Anyways imma hit the hay lol

Sean_Morabito
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Apologies in advance for not fixing some of the star wars errors from like chp 170 and below. I didn't really notice until I was far ahead like a planet name or Senator's name was spelt wrong.

Sean_Morabito
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Its very slow paced, it has over 1500 chapters and still going daily in chinese.

AinzO0alGown:I red the first 4 ,grammars good,its's kinda slow paced so in terms of plot I can't judge it right now. Anyways imma hit the hay lol
Nob7
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Can you tell me what the story is about please?

Sean_Morabito:Its very slow paced, it has over 1500 chapters and still going daily in chinese.
Sean_Morabito
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It's basically a Kingdom Building novel using technology from other universes (In the desc) with a mothership from Homeworld starting at Endor working his way to the top fighting pirates, the republic m, the empire and so on. Many MANY space battles with fleets and land battles. Basically think of the clone wars its like that show. The mc joins the confederate side so he is an enemy of the Republic/Jedi while turning to the dark side so Villian mc.

Nob7:Can you tell me what the story is about please?
M1n0
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Atleast it's spelled wrong and not named wrongly

Sean_Morabito:Its very slow paced, it has over 1500 chapters and still going daily in chinese.
Nob7
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Do you think I can read and understand this fanfic even tho I didn't watched Star Wars?. It's sound very intersting so far.. and there is Romance right?

Sean_Morabito:It's basically a Kingdom Building novel using technology from other universes (In the desc) with a mothership from Homeworld starting at Endor working his way to the top fighting pirates, the republic m, the empire and so on. Many MANY space battles with fleets and land battles. Basically think of the clone wars its like that show. The mc joins the confederate side so he is an enemy of the Republic/Jedi while turning to the dark side so Villian mc.
Nob7
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Do you think I can understand the story even tho I didn't watched Star Wars?.. It's sound really intersting, and there is Romance right?

Sean_Morabito:It's basically a Kingdom Building novel using technology from other universes (In the desc) with a mothership from Homeworld starting at Endor working his way to the top fighting pirates, the republic m, the empire and so on. Many MANY space battles with fleets and land battles. Basically think of the clone wars its like that show. The mc joins the confederate side so he is an enemy of the Republic/Jedi while turning to the dark side so Villian mc.
Sean_Morabito
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You don't need to know star wars lore to understand the story. Its all explained in this novel.

Sean_Morabito
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There is romance and some lemons later on in the story, not anytime soon though except a scene thats not shown the action.

Sean_Morabito
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I am working on fixing the Star Wars errors from previous chapters.

Sean_Morabito:Apologies in advance for not fixing some of the star wars errors from like chp 170 and below. I didn't really notice until I was far ahead like a planet name or Senator's name was spelt wrong.
SAWOEN
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Started to notice it around 70ish chaps that names was misplaced and my instead for it or you is there as well kept reading to 126 I stopped it got too much my brain stopped auto translate the mtl

Sean_Morabito:Apologies in advance for not fixing some of the star wars errors from like chp 170 and below. I didn't really notice until I was far ahead like a planet name or Senator's name was spelt wrong.
Sean_Morabito
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Im manually fixing an mtl but I miss some things like that. If its pointed out ill correct it but I've been correcting many. All the others of this book are way worse with 0 proof reading or corrections.

Sean_Morabito
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I have been fixing these errors thr last few days. Fixed up to around chap 100 now. Its just between 100 and 170 then it will all be fixed, I'm working on it.

SAWOEN:Started to notice it around 70ish chaps that names was misplaced and my instead for it or you is there as well kept reading to 126 I stopped it got too much my brain stopped auto translate the mtl
Sean_Morabito
Sean_MorabitoAuthorSean_Morabito

All chapters with errors have been fixed.

SAWOEN:Started to notice it around 70ish chaps that names was misplaced and my instead for it or you is there as well kept reading to 126 I stopped it got too much my brain stopped auto translate the mtl
ThanatosGreekGod
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I’ve never watched ANY Starwars movie but the series “Star Wars The Clone Wars” was absolutely amazing

Nob7:Do you think I can understand the story even tho I didn't watched Star Wars?.. It's sound really intersting, and there is Romance right?
ThanatosGreekGod
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you are very dedicated to fixing this novel and thanks to that you have convinced me to read! 🫡

Sean_Morabito:All chapters with errors have been fixed.
Sean_Morabito
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Np if there are any more errors I've missed I will fix them if they are pointed out.

ThanatosGreekGod:you are very dedicated to fixing this novel and thanks to that you have convinced me to read! 🫡
Ren_sama93
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Is it worth it? (The story)