Review Detail of aswsok in THOR : THE GOD OF THUNDER
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I suggest the author, Write and write new books. And read comics whenever possible. Because the author sometimes greatly overestimates the strength of the characters even though they are not, also get to know the level of the characters (1A, 1B, and so on). Also read many other books to improve the quality of the writing.
THOR : THE GOD OF THUNDER
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Author I think you can help me as well as I am also trying to write a fanfiction but couldn't get what to make Au so I could make my character reborn at that point in time. Let's start I want my character to be reborn in the body P Charles the brother of Charles Xavier that was born brain dead because Xavier half killed him when he was born and later also killed him literally fully later so the universe is Mcu with X men elements but I am siding with the main being reborn in x men first timeline and when x men travel back in time there would be a convergence and when it happens Mcu and X men merges and comics universe will also come after 5 arcs I have written 2 routes for each way I could choose to continue so I wanted your opinion.
By convergence, do you mean merging the 2 universes, MCU and X-Men? For example you could make Charles Xavier's brother be a singularity, like he would be the only brother who survived Charles' attack in the womb, unlike the other universes. Because in my opinion when the X-men go back in time? they create a new timeline that will be different from the main timeline (the timeline where SI was born in Charles Xavier's brother's body).
Marvel_Fan8502:Author I think you can help me as well as I am also trying to write a fanfiction but couldn't get what to make Au so I could make my character reborn at that point in time. Let's start I want my character to be reborn in the body P Charles the brother of Charles Xavier that was born brain dead because Xavier half killed him when he was born and later also killed him literally fully later so the universe is Mcu with X men elements but I am siding with the main being reborn in x men first timeline and when x men travel back in time there would be a convergence and when it happens Mcu and X men merges and comics universe will also come after 5 arcs I have written 2 routes for each way I could choose to continue so I wanted your opinion.
Let me clarify my second route is that the main character transmigrates into Charles's brain-dead coma brother in the first timeline and for the next part I have to clarify my mc powers but I won't tell much about his power allows him to create a fake identity without any trace not even Charles would find out so after he creates it he gets other abilities so he discusses himself as a mutant who just has mind shield and some other powers so when they are going to send wolverine to the past he gets an alert from his super mini gamer system that is just there to let him know what abilities he has and is used as a mailbox by the god who the main character has very high enmity with because the mc got that god in trouble and kind of broke a multiverse that the god was made to protect so let's get to the point when wolverine is being sent that god manipulates other entities in marvel to raise the danger level of the universe the mc so the entities merged a falling out mcu sacred timeline with x men but the god had wanted to merge comics universe so that was what I said about comics being merged later so you could that the story is kind of big as I have several fanfiction connecting with this one that I ideas for but now I think I should first make a trial fanfiction with dragon ball and see how good I could make a fanfiction without connection between different fanfiction
aswsok:By convergence, do you mean merging the 2 universes, MCU and X-Men? For example you could make Charles Xavier's brother be a singularity, like he would be the only brother who survived Charles' attack in the womb, unlike the other universes. Because in my opinion when the X-men go back in time? they create a new timeline that will be different from the main timeline (the timeline where SI was born in Charles Xavier's brother's body).
And that trial fanfiction also has two possible routes one is harem but that is going to be hardcore the second route needs heavy editing in my idea as the harem route is just the side effect of the main character's power and let me give you a spoiler it combines dragon ball and some minor movies that has monster type characters like anaconda 2 and jack the giant slayer
Marvel_Fan8502:Let me clarify my second route is that the main character transmigrates into Charles's brain-dead coma brother in the first timeline and for the next part I have to clarify my mc powers but I won't tell much about his power allows him to create a fake identity without any trace not even Charles would find out so after he creates it he gets other abilities so he discusses himself as a mutant who just has mind shield and some other powers so when they are going to send wolverine to the past he gets an alert from his super mini gamer system that is just there to let him know what abilities he has and is used as a mailbox by the god who the main character has very high enmity with because the mc got that god in trouble and kind of broke a multiverse that the god was made to protect so let's get to the point when wolverine is being sent that god manipulates other entities in marvel to raise the danger level of the universe the mc so the entities merged a falling out mcu sacred timeline with x men but the god had wanted to merge comics universe so that was what I said about comics being merged later so you could that the story is kind of big as I have several fanfiction connecting with this one that I ideas for but now I think I should first make a trial fanfiction with dragon ball and see how good I could make a fanfiction without connection between different fanfiction
Oh sorry I forgot to mention that this trial fanfiction is going to take place before the reality being broken because of the feud of the my other main character and that god and I have decided that this main is going to be one of the people who plays a part in my other fanfictions main characters survival of reality break
Marvel_Fan8502:And that trial fanfiction also has two possible routes one is harem but that is going to be hardcore the second route needs heavy editing in my idea as the harem route is just the side effect of the main character's power and let me give you a spoiler it combines dragon ball and some minor movies that has monster type characters like anaconda 2 and jack the giant slayer
aswsok:By convergence, do you mean merging the 2 universes, MCU and X-Men? For example you could make Charles Xavier's brother be a singularity, like he would be the only brother who survived Charles' attack in the womb, unlike the other universes. Because in my opinion when the X-men go back in time? they create a new timeline that will be different from the main timeline (the timeline where SI was born in Charles Xavier's brother's body).