Review Detail of HGB in The Betrayed Monarch

It's great so far !! Read till the current chapter on another account, and I have to say I've taken a shine to it. While the writing flows a bit iffy in places, for the most part, it's good. Decently stable on the updates which is always a positive thing. The story development needs some work, I'd reccommend going back over what you've written because some of the logic feels off. I like way you've done characters, and I always appreciate a good xinxia world with cultivation and whatnot. All-in-all, I'd say this a worthy read thus far !