Review Detail of Lollkl in Naruto: of Shadows and Sharingans
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Started off very good and then became dumb. How can someone be a Jonin strength kenjutsu master just by learning kenjutsu techniques from kushina from a couple of months? My god the SI is already overpowered cheat with his chakra and shadows and you want him to be A master of everything? Also a seal master and can apparently create undetectable listening seals or producing a remote heal seal. You expect me to believe the kage level ninja throughout the history of the great sage couldn’t figure it out but a guy who sleeps all day? Just do a rewrite and make everything more believable. Stop making the SI able to do everything under the sun. Like I just want him to get humbled once. 22 chapters in we haven’t seen him lost a fight full strength. No way his semi sentient shadows protect him from genjutsu. Everone has a counter. Why can’t he be humbled by a kumo guy who does the solar flare technique?
Naruto: of Shadows and Sharingans
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New to crack genre fic aren't you fam. You gotta chose your genres right man, if you want your type of fic. It's like reading a drama genre and btching about drama, or finding humour in humour genre fic n then complaining about it. Crack genre fics are like total opposite of realism, they totally depend on what author was when he wrote that shit, they don't look for can it be done or doesn't it seem not possible, nah the only thing a crack fic does is writing a parody of shits and everything is passable as long as it's funny even if they break the rule of reality. That's all the crack genre is about fam. Infact this fic has some sense of realism cause most of crack fics are wacky as sh1t.
