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  • Lollkl
    Lollkl7mth
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    Are they stupid or the author is? Just use you by aligns and confirm if the eyes are gone smh.

    Jiryoku couldn't resist shaking his head and smiling mockingly as he opened his hollow eyes. The elders were rendered speechless when they saw this.
    Naruto: Blind Hyuga
    Anime & Comics · Hkj
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  • Lollkl
    Lollkl7mth
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    So its hi has no comment on the phone technology of this world? Also you misspelled glad. He should at least comment about cell phones in this world comparing it to the phones in his home world.

    Itachi was gald Izumi saved this body's old phone otherwise he would have been in quite the predicament. He wrote down his phone number and handed the clipboard back to the tired lady.
    Itachi in Solo Leveling
    Fantasy · Lway20
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  • Lollkl
    Lollkl7mth
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    Started off very good and then became dumb. How can someone be a Jonin strength kenjutsu master just by learning kenjutsu techniques from kushina from a couple of months? My god the SI is already overpowered cheat with his chakra and shadows and you want him to be A master of everything? Also a seal master and can apparently create undetectable listening seals or producing a remote heal seal. You expect me to believe the kage level ninja throughout the history of the great sage couldn’t figure it out but a guy who sleeps all day? Just do a rewrite and make everything more believable. Stop making the SI able to do everything under the sun. Like I just want him to get humbled once. 22 chapters in we haven’t seen him lost a fight full strength. No way his semi sentient shadows protect him from genjutsu. Everone has a counter. Why can’t he be humbled by a kumo guy who does the solar flare technique?

    Naruto: of Shadows and Sharingans
    Anime & Comics · LuminouShadow
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  • Lollkl
    Lollkl7mth
    Commented

    How is Izumi using real shadow clones and not the illusion during the spar? She is only a genin. Please fix plot hole.

    Ch 18 Chapter Eighteen: Izumi II
    Naruto: of Shadows and Sharingans
    Anime & Comics · LuminouShadow
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  • Lollkl
    Lollkl2yr
    Commented

    Hi

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    Eternal Path
    Fantasy · Nightmare486
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