somehow feels boring , can't connect to MC or other characters . or maybe story telling is not good enough , keep up good work, at it wasn't a frustrating . i don't think MC has any cheats , author is not describing his powers clearly in starting chapter , it all about chatting with two random girls one is hayuga and other is uchiha. even sikamaru has more personality than these three combined . u could have described some of his future goals or his training .
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