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somehow feels boring , can't connect to MC or other characters . or maybe story telling is not good enough , keep up good work, at it wasn't a frustrating . i don't think MC has any cheats , author is not describing his powers clearly in starting chapter , it all about chatting with two random girls one is hayuga and other is uchiha. even sikamaru has more personality than these three combined . u could have described some of his future goals or his training .
good enough for me to search it on Google for free read . and i couldn't find any site that has this novel for free , strange! i found a Chinese web site and using Google translator on it. this platform (web novel ) has lost all hope and I'm not goona spend a single coin on it. i paid many time before when this was a new platform but now paying is not worth it.
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at least some one get itđ , but it wasn't overkill . let me explain clearly :- ---------------- i wanna tell author that it was great atmosphere going in the story , i feels like it's happening in a different universe . so don't ruin it with A/N and modern joke as your self . instead use his inner monologue or third pov or something else . i don't mind joke but those A/N ruined many novels . A/N can make a novel into fanfiction of low standard
i was hoping for some cultivation stuff, getting stronger slowly but i didn't see it. first chapter gave me hope for a reincarnation , system , and cultivation. but i have read almost 15 chapters i can't find any of that . what i found is that there are TWO MC, a male and a female . both have a system ( that wasn't mentioned in details , no lvl ups , no quest , just weird reward ) . things shifts around like devil fruit , mobile phone building a gundom , marriage , girls . male MC is some how top tier ruin master ( not explained at all , just author said it you believe it , no progression from start , no build up nothing ) then MC make some kind of nuke. random bullshÂĄt is flying every where and you have to make sense out of it . both MC are bickering to each other in every single chapter . and this bickering is the main story i guess . Ward background : -- ZERO CULTIVATION REALM. : - ZERO explaination CHARACTER - two mc with systems , that it .SYSTEM - author didn't care about it , it helps the plot to progress in very rare ocacasions. and pretty much a click Bait .
aahh this gobu gobu , i wanna see something interesting
too boring with no attachment to story , a guy died got system (without any explanation ) , get points by people emotions , buy stuff , more he buys the expensive other things got ( that were cheaper before but proceeds to buy random s*t ) , i don't remember any conversations or monologue. this guys and story doesn't feel right to me . no good characters other than MC . system and his deeds are boring . there was nothing that annoyed me , but i felt bored .
lol again
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just saw all the monster scene in that movie from YouTube it was 2 min. video. scary concept though .
state didn't go up .
he has the plot Armor because of him being related to Angels , so MC don't want any risk for single soul but he didn't say he won't kill him.
2 point extra doesn't suit Uzumaki at all.