Very fun idea pretty good writing quality, however the story development could be better each chapter feels like a summary of at least 10 chapters worth of development. E.g. the mc gains the stand in chapter 1 in chapter 2 he tests it out and by chapter 3 he is beating up multiple fighters in a row as well as enemy stand users. I feel that the pace could be slowed down a bit, especially for a comedy. Considering this I still think the author can be great and can't wait for either a rewrite with better pacing or another story the author writes.
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