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I'm coming from Elyon's other book, 'Strongest Necromancer of Heavens Gate,' which I highly recommend. However, this book so far is very lackluster and inorganic. This story feels more like a side project than an actual project. Nonsensical things happen just to move the story along. I know the story just started, but this one seems like it's going to be one of the author's worst works.