Review Detail of Shishivam in Forbidden Union: The Evil Prince's Temptation

So i Just read all the 12 chapters published and here my take for this book. except world building i gave 4 Stars to every aspect so i will let the author know why i deducted the points at first writing quality great exciptionaly well done, but the one point deduction is about some less catchy or attention grabbing sentence and it's consistent in every chapter there are some para which does not click story development and character design yup 4 in both again the reason for minus marking is not an issue but it's more like a wait for future chapter. update stability it's great as because it's just the start but i will like if atleast 2 to 3 chapters are their every day. because this book shows potential and last World building which deserve all the stars