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So here's the anticipated review (lol) Anyway, I read till 70 chapters at the very moment. And here are my takes. As you can see i given this book a 4. 4 star I loved to read it as the grammar was very understandable 5 stars right there. Nothing much to say about the updating stability he is bringing up chapters quick automatically 5 Star there too. Now there are 4 stars in each of the other section such as story development the thing which deducted the point is info dumps and continue pov changes. The story does seems an interesting read, but it need to take a single path. character design yeah 4 here too as author need to put more it, and i also need to read this story futher . and last world building yes 4 too because of the lack of knowing about the world yet.

Here is what i conclude after reading this book .Firstly the writing quality of this book the details the expressiveness and dailogues were well done second comes story development which is pin point as this book is totally recommended for the readers who love story and character driven polt as each chapter marks its importance third as i said it is also have different short of characters with vast intelligence Powers and etc and each of them have their importance fourth update stability bruh thats's lit 64 is something which not all authors can pulllast 5 World buliding nothing much to say just one word magnificent

But its's not Ai i wrote this I knew people will think like this way that it was written by Ai i did edited it with Ai but not wrote with that

Woo cooler than mine ngl and your English is on next though you a native but still and the characters you know i love those characters who which I can connect and i did that with the mc keep going all the best

Only the updating is what got zero rest every aspect of this fan fic is brilliant hope you can restart this magnificent tale of dragon ball

Author here rating his own story though this is somewhat a notice for you allWhoever read my story please leave a comment or suggestions which will help me to get on topplus this work is running in WPC so provide me with power stones and each 100 power stone I will provide extra chapters

Here is my honest review this one was good read as it was my first time reading any fl and i really liked it the writing quality character world everything seems synced keep going on

Here after reading all the 10 chapters also sorry for late .so for me it's a very good and okay read , it does need some character work and little more info (not a dump rest i enjoyed as me and my wife both read it and she appreciated the main character and the concept looking forward

So here's the anticipated review ( lol)Anyway ,I read 10 chapters at the very moment.And here are my takes. As you can see i given this book a 4.4 star I loved to read it as the grammar was very understandable 5 stars right there . Nothing much to say about the updating stability he is bringing up chapters quick automatically 5 Star there too.Now there are 4 stars in each of the other section such as story development the thing which deducted the point is info dumps and continue pov changes. The story does seems an interesting read ,but it need to take a single path.character design yeah 4 here too as author need to put more it ,and i also need to read this story futher .and last world building yes 4 too because of the lack of knowing about the world yet.

The story consists of vempire and different species which cool to read the World building the tales author till now is done very nicely i loved the way the character were designed and how they behave in different situations . i binged read it so i don't know what to say about the update stability rest overall a very great read keep going author

So .... um great strat i like the way you described everything and i was able to imagine the character acts i will countinue reading before putting my take on this

That's a fine description 😃

So um.... As per my knowledge the author have the amount of professional ism to write in way which pull the readers into. well deserved new book by Author Wang. the characters, world building writing style, the description and a little bit of writing msg ( show don't tell) completes the book of the day. keep going writer and keep loving your own creation. "we live in the world imagined by someone else"

So i Just read all the 12 chapters published and here my take for this book. except world building i gave 4 Stars to every aspect so i will let the author know why i deducted the points at first writing quality great exciptionaly well done, but the one point deduction is about some less catchy or attention grabbing sentence and it's consistent in every chapter there are some para which does not click story development and character design yup 4 in both again the reason for minus marking is not an issue but it's more like a wait for future chapter. update stability it's great as because it's just the start but i will like if atleast 2 to 3 chapters are their every day. because this book shows potential and last World building which deserve all the stars

just a normal everyday not so happy situation

Heyo, author here i am reviewing my own novel yes because i know it's story character and everything is great going obviously it does need improvement in like grammar and show Don't tell, but in a pov of cool story this book is great

don't worry i will do the Rs right now from here until you read my chapters

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Here after reading all the chapters, though i alredy said about how indulgence i felt after reading the character . and about the world you paved it's way very well with all of yours word Play . It was a great read completely and cool and Orion tooked the best character for me . And one last point is that as an opinion please don't add a harem it will ruin the whole plot you created between him and her. Keep going