This was actually pretty good. It starts of with a vivid setting description and immediately draws your attention to Ophelia, the main character. The worldbuilding then follows immediately after this but, I almost got lost a few times so spacing that out a bit might be a good idea. The story delves into Ophelia's past as early as chapter two, which makes it feel a little fast pace, but not to a degree where its overbearing. All in all this was a good read, just mind the pacing and you should be fine.
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