a good concept story but just one thing killed it for me and that's bad grammar at points in the story that were really irritating for me .like I don't comment on grammar because mine is also not that good but it helps pull the story at it's worse points and accentuates some best points .so yeah if anyone wants my opinion then I will say give it a try for a few chapters and if it's not to your liking then leave it . Bye bye fellow review readers.
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