Review Detail of Kimikyu in The Golem Mage
Review detail
It's an interesting story, world, and magic. It's just the absolute lack of grammar, and many sentences make no sense. Also, the pay wall is way too early, especially for the quality and length of the chapters. The characters are decent, but half the time, you can't understand their intentions or emotions because of the poor writing.
The Golem Mage
mystic dark
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was trying to read the free chapters to decide if I wanted to actually pay for chapters. they end before readers can get a decent understanding of how the story will go, and the overall quality of the story up to that point is frankly bad. not sure how this ended up in the top 50 power rankings, and if it's past the pay wall I just can't find anything in what I read up to that point that makes me want to continue
Random_guy36:was trying to read the free chapters to decide if I wanted to actually pay for chapters. they end before readers can get a decent understanding of how the story will go, and the overall quality of the story up to that point is frankly bad. not sure how this ended up in the top 50 power rankings, and if it's past the pay wall I just can't find anything in what I read up to that point that makes me want to continue
Random_guy36:was trying to read the free chapters to decide if I wanted to actually pay for chapters. they end before readers can get a decent understanding of how the story will go, and the overall quality of the story up to that point is frankly bad. not sure how this ended up in the top 50 power rankings, and if it's past the pay wall I just can't find anything in what I read up to that point that makes me want to continue