Review Detail of Xerstoren in Never Give a Yandere a Bolter

After finishing with an initial assessment on the novel, here's my review so far till the latest chapter (8) Grammatically I can't say anything since I suck on the matter and can only complain in works that are out of MTL or Google translate. If your English sucks as much as mine, then you wouldn't have any problem with this novel, it's completely readable and I believe it has good grammar, I don't know to be honest. Then we'll go on the novel pacing; thus far has been great! It never felt rush and the length of each chapters leaves enough room for the author to keep you satisfied at the end of it, only those greedy that wished to rush chapter after chapter would find a complain in that regard. 5/5 in that regard. - Characters; So far they were well depicted, maybe the MC wouldn't be cup of tea from the edgy lord's that seemed to abound this app, but I reckon everyone will be satisfied with him. You can clearly understand that the lad is simple minded, although it has been implied he's a man of culture, it's too early to properly judge in that aspect. Sabine thus far has been perfectly wife material and it's honour me to says that between the various waifus on this site, she's around the top. [Personal rant; Btw I wish my girlfriend was a sister of battle too, but I guess not everyone could be so lucky as the MC] The other minor characters has also been well portrayed and you can imagine them existing in the world depicted by the author. In characters regards I say 4.5/5. not five because I feel envy of the mc. - World building; thus far there isn't too much in this aspect since is well too early in the novel to say something about it, though I have to say that it does feels like it's a novel in Warhammer, the vibes are there, the feeling that something bigger is going on could be felt, and more importantly, the feeling that this should get a happy feeling is there too. Though I really hope this doesn't end like your common Warhammer story. With something tragical in between. 4/5 in this regard, we shall see in the future. Nonetheless, for the fellow degenerates members of the Adeptus Mechanicum, it seems like there will be a slight harem, though is heavily implied that the main girl and the one mc will be spending his last days will be with Sabine, I have raised my expectations to see him plowing some bunny in the future. That's all I have to report to you my fellow brothers, see you in another Warhammer work in the future!