Review Detail of AAAHH_ in bbiobn

While only two chapters long so far, the premise is super interesting and very intriguing. An older brother trying to protect his younger sister in a cruel, merciless world. We also get some background on the male mc that brings depth to the character and the world. If there is some advice I could give you is the same I received myself when I started, keep it past tense. You swap between past and present, but keeping it past tense will improve the readers experience and you'll see your writing style improve in an instant. Keep up the good work author, your story has a very interesting start with a lot of potential.