Review Detail of EvilBlueCrystal in Naruto: Clan of Shinobi
Review detail
The protagonist is super op with useless wishes and dumb abilities of infinite Chakra, can use impossible jutsu with no training or learning, and acts like one in a trillion genius arrogant young master with no intelligent thoughts or planning, that creates harem simply because he's forced to. The plot is overly boring with no development and purpose, accompanied with bad interactions and dialog, and lacking descriptions about the world.
Naruto: Clan of Shinobi
Passerby_Venne
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Passerby_Venne:My intention was not to entertain you, it was for you to read my fanfic, then get angry, and in your anger, leave a bad review.In that review, I would comment something funny. we'd start talking a bit, and eventually we'd hit it off.Suddenly one day, you get news that'll shake your world, turns out you're a woman, Your parents tricked you! So you come crying on my shoulder, and slowly, I'll take care of you, until you'll realize how much I mean to you. we'll fall in love, get married, have lots of children, then when we're 89 years old, and you say "I love you!" to me, that's when I'll strike. I'll go "Ha! I got you!"You'll be confused at what's going on and you'll say "Got me? How?" I'll answer "I never loved you, this was my plan, to make you fall in love with me for 60 years so I can dump your butt and break your heart!" You'll start crying and I'll be laughing "How does it feel?" I'll ask in a mocking tone."Why did you do this to me?" You'll say with red eyes from all the crying."Because this is how you hurt me all those years ago when you left a bad review, so I'm hurting you back!" Then I'll leave you all broken and alone!"After being dumped you'll love alone, in a big, cold, lonely house with no one to love you because you're 89 years old. your youth is gone, you're weak in your body, your heart is as empty as your house.That's my revenge plan, the perfect revenge plan if I might add.Also, remember to visit your grandparents and elders, it can get lonely to be old.
Passerby_Venne:That's exactly what I was going for, I'm happy that you're dissatisfied.
My intention was not to entertain you, it was for you to read my fanfic, then get angry, and in your anger, leave a bad review.In that review, I would comment something funny. we'd start talking a bit, and eventually we'd hit it off.Suddenly one day, you get news that'll shake your world, turns out you're a woman, Your parents tricked you! So you come crying on my shoulder, and slowly, I'll take care of you, until you'll realize how much I mean to you. we'll fall in love, get married, have lots of children, then when we're 89 years old, and you say "I love you!" to me, that's when I'll strike. I'll go "Ha! I got you!"You'll be confused at what's going on and you'll say "Got me? How?" I'll answer "I never loved you, this was my plan, to make you fall in love with me for 60 years so I can dump your butt and break your heart!" You'll start crying and I'll be laughing "How does it feel?" I'll ask in a mocking tone."Why did you do this to me?" You'll say with red eyes from all the crying."Because this is how you hurt me all those years ago when you left a bad review, so I'm hurting you back!" Then I'll leave you all broken and alone!"After being dumped you'll love alone, in a big, cold, lonely house with no one to love you because you're 89 years old. your youth is gone, you're weak in your body, your heart is as empty as your house.That's my revenge plan, the perfect revenge plan if I might add.Also, remember to visit your grandparents and elders, it can get lonely to be old.
Manamanam:If that was what you are going for, then you did a perfect job. Because he is not wrong,
Passerby_Venne:My intention was not to entertain you, it was for you to read my fanfic, then get angry, and in your anger, leave a bad review.In that review, I would comment something funny. we'd start talking a bit, and eventually we'd hit it off.Suddenly one day, you get news that'll shake your world, turns out you're a woman, Your parents tricked you! So you come crying on my shoulder, and slowly, I'll take care of you, until you'll realize how much I mean to you. we'll fall in love, get married, have lots of children, then when we're 89 years old, and you say "I love you!" to me, that's when I'll strike. I'll go "Ha! I got you!"You'll be confused at what's going on and you'll say "Got me? How?" I'll answer "I never loved you, this was my plan, to make you fall in love with me for 60 years so I can dump your butt and break your heart!" You'll start crying and I'll be laughing "How does it feel?" I'll ask in a mocking tone."Why did you do this to me?" You'll say with red eyes from all the crying."Because this is how you hurt me all those years ago when you left a bad review, so I'm hurting you back!" Then I'll leave you all broken and alone!"After being dumped you'll love alone, in a big, cold, lonely house with no one to love you because you're 89 years old. your youth is gone, you're weak in your body, your heart is as empty as your house.That's my revenge plan, the perfect revenge plan if I might add.Also, remember to visit your grandparents and elders, it can get lonely to be old.