Review Detail of JustJacky in Naruto: Clan of Shinobi

You said that most people were disappointed with his wish, which isn't true. I read all the comments I get, and like 80-90 percent of them are positive.As for the training, when have I said that he doesn't do just that? This fanfic started out when he already achieved Hokage level strength, so we haven't seen his hard training in the academy and early teenage years.This fanfic isn't so much about training as the other elements of it. I don't want to repeat the same route as every other fanfic does. I noticed it the last few times, when I read Naruto fanfics, it always starts when he is super young then I have to read 20-50 chapter when he is newborn until he is 12 and graduates, it's the same story with different words.Trains secretly with shadow clones-> grows stronger-> graduates with good points-> THEN the story really starts.I wanted to skip all that which we have read like a thousand times already.We have only seen one scene so far of his training, but he does train lots behind the scenes, which I haven't gone into the depth of how he does.I felt like I had to say this as two other people also asked about this.It's not that he doesn't use it, it's that the story doesn't revolve around his training.Please don't make it out that most people were disappointed, it's not true, a huge majority of my readers gave this good comments.The only thing that was controversial was whether Hiruzen was OP in his prime or not. That was the only thing most people were riled up about.

So true. The childhood to the true story is a bit boring. Haven't read the story yet, but I am still gonna give my opinion about Hiruzen. He was very powerful in his prime. Mere politics doesn't make everyone call you the god of shinobi. You have to have the power to back that up. You doubt him? good, because they doubt him more strongly.