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The pacing felt alright. It wasn't too slow nor fast. Able to understand what was written. However.. some parts felt confusing, maybe it's just me and my lack of sleep. The brother also died from that one punch? That's all.. maybe I gotta reread and understand.. Book is still early to say anything much, but so far, the character description is quite solid.

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My Pirate Wives

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Oh good that you mentioned it. There is some magic involved and I probably have to clear it all up by editing a chap so that readers will not be confused