Review Detail of phantompain in Loki reborn

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phantompainAuthor1yrphantompain

Previously, an avid reader of all types of stories with a very active imagination. Just an amateur writer, I had a vision of Obito Uchiha as Loki. I saw no one writing anything like that so I decided that I alone will make my vision true. This is my first time writing and if anyone believes that I am ruining a perfectly good Loki fanfic. You are welcome to write one to prove me wrong . I would happily read it. Again, this is my story and if you have a problem with the way the plot is progressing. Then Write one better then . There can never be enough stories. I would also like to thank Monark, stevenwar and all my other lovely supporters. Stevenwar thanks for catching my mistakes.

Loki reborn

phantompain

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Chaos_GodKingLv6Chaos_GodKing

Thank you for writing this.

1yr

Otaku_Gamer_00007Lv4Otaku_Gamer_00007

This is garbage maybe that's why no one wrote moron 😡

1yr

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phantompainAuthorphantompain

Better then what you wrote.

Otaku_Gamer_00007:This is garbage maybe that's why no one wrote moron 😡

1yr

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Cyber_Tom67Lv4Cyber_Tom67

Hahaha, BURN!!!

Otaku_Gamer_00007:This is garbage maybe that's why no one wrote moron 😡

1yr

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Otaku_Gamer_00007Lv4Otaku_Gamer_00007

What a valid Defense point I am Garbage so what you are Bad to Bruh

phantompain:Better then what you wrote.

1yr

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AsssapanLv4Asssapan

if you don't like this ff then don't read and That it

Otaku_Gamer_00007:What a valid Defense point I am Garbage so what you are Bad to Bruh

1yr

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IMPAiLERLv5IMPAiLER

So according to the synopsis Loki sacrifices his magic? The one thing that makes up the majority of Loki's character?

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NyxioLv4Nyxio

I feel the same way :/ is it still Loki without his magic?

IMPAiLER:So according to the synopsis Loki sacrifices his magic? The one thing that makes up the majority of Loki's character?

8mth

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Muhammad_Ali_3814Lv3Muhammad_Ali_3814

Auther I really like this novel and I hope you continue to write more and finish the story,

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