Review Detail of striker45 in THE EVIL VILLAIN SYSTEM

Well writing review after a long while anyway. It has wack prologue i have ever seen from multiple POV changes (some of which are of random side characters) to 4th wall breaks to flashbacks in future timeline. Overall it was really weird close to none flow in the story It was getting interesting around chapter 18 but it's paid after 20 and I'm not really invested to continue reading. Hope you progress in your writing bro.