Review Detail of Benoit_Valtin in Harry potter: The ringmaker

read ahead it gets better and fanfics are meant to be different from canon. I like the Mc.

I'm pretty sure the MC is smarter than you.

I appreciate the “almost sure” so much 🤣🙄

sorry for not having responded, so you say it's improving, but brother, it was 30 chapters when I gave up xD it's not nothing how many more chapters I have to wait, and I also have to forget all the inconsistencies what did I quote? continuing a story with so many flaws because it ended up being better is not the right answer.

"and in the life of HP there is no job that you learn like magic even there you have to work so his craft is too much to do directly" That doesn't make sense. Both in that there is nothing in the books or lore that indicates what I think you're trying to say and in that your wording is very hard to comprehend and borders on nonsensical gibberish.

79 people seem to have understood, too bad if that's not your case. good night, or day

If you don’t like it just say that