Review Detail of Taco_Burrito_5711 in Harry potter: The ringmaker

Item: Harry potter: The ringmaker
Rating: 5

Review detail

Taco_Burrito_5711Lv41yrTaco_Burrito_5711

I was reading this trying to figure out why it was so well written so far... and realized I've read half the other stories this author has posted and thought 'yeah that makes sense'.

Harry potter: The ringmaker

loskro

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loskroAuthorloskro

lol

1yr

Young_fruit_SmileyLv14Young_fruit_Smiley

is it usable ?🤔

loskro:lol

1yr

Young_fruit_SmileyLv14Young_fruit_Smiley

or this

Young_fruit_Smiley:is it usable ?🤔
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1yr

craze_8093Lv15craze_8093

I just realized the same after reading this post lol

1yr

Sleeping_dragon26Lv14Sleeping_dragon26

More please

1yr

Ayko_7521Lv5Ayko_7521

The writing quality could be better tho...There are a lot of messy sentences imo

1yr

Sam0207Lv4Sam0207

Hey Author, I really like your novel. The grammar is also very good. There are no obvious mistakes. But the punctuation can use a little. Can I be the Free Editor for this one? I need no money. I just want to practice my English. Hope you consider it!

loskro:lol

1yr

Krassus_2Lv4Krassus_2

dear author is this harem?

loskro:lol

7mth

loskroAuthorloskro

Krassus_2:dear author is this harem?

7mth

GodOfDegeneratesLv4GodOfDegenerates

Is there a love interest and if so who?

loskro:No

7mth

Yok_SanaLv4Yok_Sana

Did you read it if so who

GodOfDegenerates:Is there a love interest and if so who?

4mth

GodOfDegeneratesLv4GodOfDegenerates

I don’t remember

Yok_Sana:Did you read it if so who
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4mth

Yok_SanaLv4Yok_Sana

I don’t even remember when is my birthday

GodOfDegenerates:I don’t remember
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4mth

leonardo_luzLv3leonardo_luz

yes, but it is in the final arc, and she's a original character

GodOfDegenerates:Is there a love interest and if so who?

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