This story starts off very very differently than others of this Genre. Which, I like; don't get me wrong. Took a bit to understand what was going on since the first few chapters were dedicated to grouping all the main characters together and setting up the backstory scene. Then spoke as to why everything was happening. I love it. Most of these stories, are set when everyone is adults; not Teens in high school, so that's a great difference. Besides a few grammar mistakes that others have pointed out, I love your thought process and story plot. Keep it up
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