Overall, this story is amazing and worth the read; so long as you can get past the first chapters of pre knowledge. If you can, you will see that Akash is more than a worthy enough successor and won’t let any foolish obstacles deter his path. He is focused, unwavering, and won't accept anything for free. Thankfully. He is not transported to modern day Earth which is a 100% for me, cause I don't want to hear about boring affairs. But now.......this story is starting to get interesting. Can't wait for the Tamer fights. Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh!!!!!

Woooooooooo!!!!!!! Now that's how you wow someone. From the synopsis, to the cover, to the drawings; and the first chapter. I love it. Keep up the great work. This story is going place

I love this story especially being with no System. the MC is not clueless or lost at all. He quickly gains his surroundings and moves into his role. Even the secondary characters have their own way of helping and feel loved. If you want, here is another great one you can read where the action fighting is at a minimum, and its all about Kingdom building and character development, every day, every event, and no Time jumps whatsoever. Keep it up Author!!!!! https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-26-and-friends_18585770806398305 Ps, nothing is locked.

This story starts off very very differently than others of this Genre. Which, I like; don't get me wrong. Took a bit to understand what was going on since the first few chapters were dedicated to grouping all the main characters together and setting up the backstory scene. Then spoke as to why everything was happening. I love it. Most of these stories, are set when everyone is adults; not Teens in high school, so that's a great difference. Besides a few grammar mistakes that others have pointed out, I love your thought process and story plot. Keep it up

She's awakening out of fear. Like most do their first time

Eeeeeeee. She's a wherewolf

Shapeshifter. Dan da da dunn!!!

I knew it. The first person to speak up is 9/10 times the person you should be following. Just trying to cover his tracks

I take it this Trio is more then meets the eye

Oh yeah. Here comes the big bad wolf ready to mess everything up

I hate that. Please don't pick me. Please don't pick me. Please don't pick me.

Keep up the amazing, wonderful work. You'll go far. I just know it.

First off, I read a story about a Panda; a frog; a dog, and even a Lilypad. Also a tree. Here's one about a Bamboo. How could I ever. Anyways, I love the story and all the others you create; but this one specifically is so engaging. It screams you 100%. Keep it up and keep making us smile. I could get lost in this book.

Awesome sauces. Another short story but very well crafted and put together. I felt all the characters had arches and none were stringent same old characters. Give it a read. You won't regret it.

Thanks for the review. I promise that it stays light but gets ton better later on. You have only just begun to know Ruby and all of her adventures of saving the Kingdom; or even that she has magical powers. No, Upfront; Kings, Queens........You missed a lot, but I thank you. *Huge virtual hug*

I'm just being honest. Don't hurt me. I liked this little, short story. At first, I thought it skipped around a lot, but then seeing explanations for what happened afterwards; in the form of flashbacks; I could appease myself. This story felt fast paced, but then I realized I was already nearing the ending. Keep it up Scarlett.

Yeah he finally found his horse. I was beginning to worry

People always have a way of defying orders and finding the one thing they are not supposed to find. We're like Lab hounds. Our nose to the ground; our ears at attention; we find anything

I like your story and can't wait to see where it goes. The trope of weak to strong is often overused, but you have shown that in a new light. Love the pacing so far and can't wait for more.

Reviews as of chapter 13 Why you play with my heartstrings like that, Chloe. Besides pricking, I really enjoyed the story thus far. The pacing, the plot; and the chapters the right size. Too long and their is no need. Too short and their is now not enough. Keep it up. I hope they all make it out okay. Wouldn't be surprised if they distance themselves for a few after the cave incident and then a few weeks to years pass by. Keep chugging away and being awesome. I am positive this book will touch on everyone's emotions and take them on a roller coaster all around.