Review Detail of ratty_islandr in The Primordial Record

I am very interested in the story and I would love to read this… But the grammar is messing with my mind. I read up to 20 chapters and I think Author adds too many commas, even in places where periods should be. That makes a lot of difference for me as a reader. I’m not a professional but I’ve been reading for a while now so I can see some mistakes. I will leave this in my will read folders and come back later to see if you have hopefully edited or have gotten an editor.. This is just my opinion so guys go easy on me.