Review Detail of Pilotfranco in Twilight: Really! I Didn't Ask For This!

Shit mc- mc just smokes weed and is a loner, those are his sole defining factors. Weed is mentioned a lot like wtf, smoking is something that’s casual and yet the author brings it up a lot. Story development- ya so there is the usual girls fall for no reason trash you’d see in most fics but here the mc is weird about it too, he asked Leah’s dad to date? Why, that isn’t traditional it’s extra, dating is to get to know the person. Marriage is where you’d ask the dad. He promises Jessica that he’d date/marry he if she wants in 5 years. His whole relationship with rose is just weird af. There’s a system btw, ya I know why. It’s mentioned a few time here and there but there isn’t really any point in it, it’s like it was added but the author either forgot or has it as an afterthought. Either way the fic is shit, complete garbage.