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TruthHurtsX1000
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Its good story. Only reason its not best for me is 1 keeping age of starting journey at 10 is dumb to me. 2 stating that he will look 10 almost forever is dumb af aswell. Your making oc characters and pokemon moves but ignore some of the best things to change.

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Pokémon: Twin brother of Ash Ketchum

NovelGod_Dao

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Ajay_Nunda_2928
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Why are you so workup about it's if you don't like it then Don't read it. Why do you complain so much 😔

TruthHurtsX1000:No it means just copying the anime. Non anime it had people dieing. So yeah it off anime they can all survive if off non anime alot died. So any ff that keeps age 10 is just dumb to me. Some will like it. Its not for me. Adding all the powers doesn't make a difference either
NovelGod_Dao
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About that 1) I explained why they start their journey at ten 2) Silver at the end of the Indigo league will look like 11 or 12 by Kalos' beginning, he will he like 14 or 15. If you still don't like, I am sorry then.

TruthHurtsX1000
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10 no matter what is dumb age for a real life pokemon. Be dead af lol

Divine_Might
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So that's why it is fanfic.

TruthHurtsX1000:10 no matter what is dumb age for a real life pokemon. Be dead af lol
TruthHurtsX1000
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No it means just copying the anime. Non anime it had people dieing. So yeah it off anime they can all survive if off non anime alot died. So any ff that keeps age 10 is just dumb to me. Some will like it. Its not for me. Adding all the powers doesn't make a difference either

Divine_Might:So that's why it is fanfic.
TruthHurtsX1000
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Did i comment on your post. No .if you dont like my opinion then stay to your self

Ajay_Nunda_2928:Why are you so workup about it's if you don't like it then Don't read it. Why do you complain so much 😔