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The problem is not that MC is weak as fkk, it's that even after having majin buu and aizen fully assimilated templates he lost to a no name character hawk girl................Well the novel was full of b.s since the beginning but I kept reading as it's author first time writing but after having power, abilities and experiences of majin buu and aizen souske he lost to a no name charcter such as hawkgirl just spits in the name of characters he assimilated
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Good comment. But you see i am a fan of DC comics and i am sure other fans will know it that Hawkgirl is not a no name. She has very strong and she also is very tough. Her body is enhanced with Nth metal. I don’t know if you know this but this metal has very interesting properties. It can merge with anything even the soul of someone. It also has anti magic properties. Anyway i think your anger was my fault. Adrian didn’t actually lose to her. He let her win. He maybe immortal and has great regeneration but he still felt pain from the attacks from Hawkgirl as she is superstrong. And he was constantly blocking and taking direct hits from. He may have majin buu's powers but he was still an amature in battle. So he got hit and took damage then felt pain. He regenerated the damage but he got hit again and again. For this he was exhausted mentally not physically. And he just took a little rest. That’s it really. Now this is my fault as a writer that i couldn’t explain the situation. But thank you for reading anyway. I will try my best to write and explain more from now. I will also try to fix it. So please keep reading and have a good day.
As your a new author let me explain to you something, Templates and gaining power of someone are two different things. Only gaining powers means he does not have aizen's and majin buu's stats, experience, talent, will, mental strength or any other of their strengths and he has to practice to make himself proficient in using them WHILE gaining templates and maxing out their assimilation means that he can do the exact same thing as the character template can do without any nerfs such as he's an amateur, doesn't have mental strength, needs practice or he's a human(of a weaker race than the template) etc. MC in your story behaves like he gained powers of majin buu and aizen while you are saying he is gaining their templates. Just Majin buu alone is enough to finish of hawk girl as she's not planetary level.
Expbar:Good comment. But you see i am a fan of DC comics and i am sure other fans will know it that Hawkgirl is not a no name. She has very strong and she also is very tough. Her body is enhanced with Nth metal. I don’t know if you know this but this metal has very interesting properties. It can merge with anything even the soul of someone. It also has anti magic properties. Anyway i think your anger was my fault. Adrian didn’t actually lose to her. He let her win. He maybe immortal and has great regeneration but he still felt pain from the attacks from Hawkgirl as she is superstrong. And he was constantly blocking and taking direct hits from. He may have majin buu's powers but he was still an amature in battle. So he got hit and took damage then felt pain. He regenerated the damage but he got hit again and again. For this he was exhausted mentally not physically. And he just took a little rest. That’s it really. Now this is my fault as a writer that i couldn’t explain the situation. But thank you for reading anyway. I will try my best to write and explain more from now. I will also try to fix it. So please keep reading and have a good day.
Expbar:Good comment. But you see i am a fan of DC comics and i am sure other fans will know it that Hawkgirl is not a no name. She has very strong and she also is very tough. Her body is enhanced with Nth metal. I don’t know if you know this but this metal has very interesting properties. It can merge with anything even the soul of someone. It also has anti magic properties. Anyway i think your anger was my fault. Adrian didn’t actually lose to her. He let her win. He maybe immortal and has great regeneration but he still felt pain from the attacks from Hawkgirl as she is superstrong. And he was constantly blocking and taking direct hits from. He may have majin buu's powers but he was still an amature in battle. So he got hit and took damage then felt pain. He regenerated the damage but he got hit again and again. For this he was exhausted mentally not physically. And he just took a little rest. That’s it really. Now this is my fault as a writer that i couldn’t explain the situation. But thank you for reading anyway. I will try my best to write and explain more from now. I will also try to fix it. So please keep reading and have a good day.
I haven't read this webnovel yet (I'm about to) but if MC really assimilated Maajin Buu's template then there's no way he would ever lose to someone like Hawkgirl. Maajin Buu is a world busting tier character. A single punch from him would turn Hawkgirl into paste, Nth metal or not.
Expbar:Good comment. But you see i am a fan of DC comics and i am sure other fans will know it that Hawkgirl is not a no name. She has very strong and she also is very tough. Her body is enhanced with Nth metal. I don’t know if you know this but this metal has very interesting properties. It can merge with anything even the soul of someone. It also has anti magic properties. Anyway i think your anger was my fault. Adrian didn’t actually lose to her. He let her win. He maybe immortal and has great regeneration but he still felt pain from the attacks from Hawkgirl as she is superstrong. And he was constantly blocking and taking direct hits from. He may have majin buu's powers but he was still an amature in battle. So he got hit and took damage then felt pain. He regenerated the damage but he got hit again and again. For this he was exhausted mentally not physically. And he just took a little rest. That’s it really. Now this is my fault as a writer that i couldn’t explain the situation. But thank you for reading anyway. I will try my best to write and explain more from now. I will also try to fix it. So please keep reading and have a good day.
After majin buu's template he was only 5x stronger then normal humans and that is just stupid what was the point of the anime system
Expbar:Good comment. But you see i am a fan of DC comics and i am sure other fans will know it that Hawkgirl is not a no name. She has very strong and she also is very tough. Her body is enhanced with Nth metal. I don’t know if you know this but this metal has very interesting properties. It can merge with anything even the soul of someone. It also has anti magic properties. Anyway i think your anger was my fault. Adrian didn’t actually lose to her. He let her win. He maybe immortal and has great regeneration but he still felt pain from the attacks from Hawkgirl as she is superstrong. And he was constantly blocking and taking direct hits from. He may have majin buu's powers but he was still an amature in battle. So he got hit and took damage then felt pain. He regenerated the damage but he got hit again and again. For this he was exhausted mentally not physically. And he just took a little rest. That’s it really. Now this is my fault as a writer that i couldn’t explain the situation. But thank you for reading anyway. I will try my best to write and explain more from now. I will also try to fix it. So please keep reading and have a good day.