Review Detail of Violet_Ivory in Master Of The Great Ball

There are only 5 chapters at the time of this review. The grammar is good, with little to no errors that I could spot. The word choice on the hand was a little rough in the beginning. I feel as though there were better ways you could phrase the sentences better. Tai Jin is a pretty cool character. And the concept behind the plot is cool. This could be a good read with a little more refining