Review Detail of Yogsa in Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Iseeyou:It’s not forced though? He was getting bullied by the entire school basically and he showed up and got his revenge. Plus he gets tons of good loot for it so it was worth it.

hero4hire:isnt that exactly why its forced? Author set up the whole scnerio for the sole purpose of 'face slapping' which completely felt out of line from storyline. I mean its his story he can do what he want, he can even wake up tomorrow and give mc laser eyes and monster pp with a ✌️"valid" ✌️ reason but doesnt mean readers are gonna accept it.

Iseeyou:Nah, if you look at it like that then every single scenario is forced in every single novel. You seem to be upset about the so called ”face slapping” which is okay but that doesn’t make the novel bad.

Yogsa:Face slapping is not bad but face slapping that is stretched for several chapter makes the story boring. Like I was hyped that 'now the barrier is gone, how will Mc expand his territory or explore the jungle or what new subject he will summon etc.' but all hype was drowned by the very long scene. I agree those classmate had it coming but I find those hatchlings and war schemes more interesting.And the reason I called it forced because the Mc was more composed and calculative when he killed 7-star hero or destroyed the 1-star territory and here, he was easily triggered when the boy unintentionally fired arrow in his direction. Bro, the elves fired many arrows at you. Why don't you go and fight them if you don't like people firing arrows at you.

Yogsa:Face slapping is not bad but face slapping that is stretched for several chapter makes the story boring. Like I was hyped that 'now the barrier is gone, how will Mc expand his territory or explore the jungle or what new subject he will summon etc.' but all hype was drowned by the very long scene. I agree those classmate had it coming but I find those hatchlings and war schemes more interesting.And the reason I called it forced because the Mc was more composed and calculative when he killed 7-star hero or destroyed the 1-star territory and here, he was easily triggered when the boy unintentionally fired arrow in his direction. Bro, the elves fired many arrows at you. Why don't you go and fight them if you don't like people firing arrows at you.

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TheWorthyOne:Understandable why he deleted it

HideousGrain:Yogsa, it looks like you didn't read the novel thoroughly. That's fine tho. You are free to leave if you don't understand the necessity of certain events, and the meaning of character growth

EphemeralKaos:You shouldn't delete any review. People should have the freedom to decide what and how they review something just because you get a little upset doesn't mean it's right to remove reviews if you want good reviews and don't want bad reviews. Just write a good story, plain and simple. If you want examples of that, just look around WebNovel.

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HideousGrain:WN deletes most reviews automatically if the reviewer adds certain words/catchphrases. I only delete low-star reviews without like 1-star reviews without any critique. 1-star + emojis is a valid delete imo. if you think differently that's fine tho.

EphemeralKaos:You consider it a valid delete, but I don't consider any delete valid. I don't agree with censorship at all and that's what it is it really just censorship. I really don't have that many problems with your story. I think it's a great story. I think it is mostly well written, but there's a pretty severe problem with your main character and his decision-making at least until I get better down the line, but I'm not gonna be here for that, unfortunately