Review Detail of Harleeyah24 in Talon Flintwolf the last Dragonborn of Tylingariea series

So the storyline seems pretty comprehensive and cohesive right frok the start. I liked how specific the descrsiptions were and plot progression is quite commendable. The only advice I’d give, is that the charcter names are too long and don’t roll off easy on the reading-mind. It’s not a big issue, but it can become an issue in the long run and cause hindrances for your readers. So, I would suggest you come up with nicknames or shortened versions of your characters names, just to provide easy assimilation for readers. Good job!