Review Detail of Rizki_Caturianto in Pokemon: Radical Redux

It's a great Pokemon fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a very great storyline/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is great too... I like that "Ash" is more smart and do his job to train his pokemon to become stronger.. He not only caught pokemon original Ash caught, but also other pokemon.. I like to see he still go with his friends (Brook and Misty), but he also go with Yellow.. I think he should go to Rota to learn and train his Aura.. I also hope to see Yellow got better with her power.. I like Ash interaction with his pokemon and other people.. Why he have a double (he create it using his Aura)?? It's not Naruto.. And why he play to much at crucial time (like when he fight Executive Pretel in Lavender Town).. That's my only complaint.. But overall it's a very great story 😁👍 Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍