Review Detail of BlackShadow66 in Surviving In An Island With My Survival System
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your novel is good is just that, in your 1-14 chapter is just that your writing is a little hard to understand. I know that your new. [img=recommend] but in 15 and above, the story became a little good, not like the 1st chapters. the story has become more interesting and entertaining. btw. I need more[img=update][img=update][img=update]
Surviving In An Island With My Survival System
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wow, bro thank you so much. I really appreciated wait your the one who rated my other novel right. I'm gonna dropped that one. because i find it hard to develop a conversation with too many characters. so that's why I want to focused and practiced my writing in this novel that just only had a few characters.
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APHELIOUS:wow, bro thank you so much. I really appreciated wait your the one who rated my other novel right. I'm gonna dropped that one. because i find it hard to develop a conversation with too many characters. so that's why I want to focused and practiced my writing in this novel that just only had a few characters.