Review Detail of Daragon_Fiyar in Level up with Pills and Herbs

The story's intonation is much better, the plot is not too rushed, the dialogue is quite good, but the punctuation is very, very poor. This is how it should be if you use a question mark. Do not add a period. That is very wrong. "!." is very foolish and incorrect. Just use "!" or "." separately. For example, "Hey Luffy! How are you!" Okay, just use the exclamation mark. Do not add it with a period. Also, do not add the combination of "!?" too frequently and continuously. It is very inefficient and uncomfortable. Just use "!" or "?" alone.