Review Detail of Bananaking123 in Transmigrated as Azazel's son in DXD(Fan-Fiction)
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Yo, i just see you write Dxd fic Here is my advice never write Dxd story by using Dxd anime as reference, Because unlike in light novel, dxd version anime ruin a lot of characters, especially Issei's characters hard to the point that reduce him into fanservice machine.
Transmigrated as Azazel's son in DXD(Fan-Fiction)
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Pretty much, it was kind of advertising at this point, but, hey from reply i got, most of authors, most likely never actually reading light novel, so good amount of them end up useful and get positive reply, interesting enough, i never get any negative from authors themselves though, there are two times(including this one) where i get negative reply but both time comes from other reviewers, just out of curiosity, have you ever reply to me before or this is first time?
Scarface3699:its annoying seeing u everywhere tho even if intent is good.
there is no real reason to keep issei around because the main character can replace him without the trash character flaws the original MC had and as far as advice goes the best I could give is what matters is dialogue if the character have a good chemistry even if some are bratty or b****y it cana be funny or cute like a tsundere just don't make the MC too much of a simp or giga Chad because trying to over correct character flaws is overrated the rest is secondary not saying it's not important but just less so, you look throughout other fanfics dialogue too see what I'm talking about
In my defense, you would understand me if you literally have read Dxd fanfics more than 200 stories and discover that they have exactly plot and routine.
ODlUM:Bro really be going under every highschool dxd story and says thisimage
Bananaking123:In my defense, you would understand me if you literally have read Dxd fanfics more than 200 stories and discover that they have exactly plot and routine.
To be fair, I think seeing bunches of bad DxD fanfics are worse than this, if this help filter out bad fanfics then, it is great.
Scarface3699:its annoying seeing u everywhere tho even if intent is good.
it doesn't filter anything it's just the same comment everywhere and it always changes nothing. The actual real reviewers are the only ones that filter the garbage ones out
Daoschemer:To be fair, I think seeing bunches of bad DxD fanfics are worse than this, if this help filter out bad fanfics then, it is great.
Scarface3699:it doesn't filter anything it's just the same comment everywhere and it always changes nothing. The actual real reviewers are the only ones that filter the garbage ones out
first time and it's whatever I'm over it now. I'd just skip it when I read the first couple of words now
Bananaking123:Pretty much, it was kind of advertising at this point, but, hey from reply i got, most of authors, most likely never actually reading light novel, so good amount of them end up useful and get positive reply, interesting enough, i never get any negative from authors themselves though, there are two times(including this one) where i get negative reply but both time comes from other reviewers, just out of curiosity, have you ever reply to me before or this is first time?