Review Detail of Railvas in One Wish to Own the World
Review detail
Hey everyone, the first volume is over, so I can feel free to clear some doubts here. 1. Although MC is intelligent in general, understanding is the most important part of his intelligence. Understanding cultivation and techniques in order to improve them and advance fast. He doesn't know the future, and he is neither Kira nor Lelouch. 2. He isn't as twisted as the MC from Reverend Insanity. He is a villain in the sense he kills innocents who did nothing wrong for personal gain. He isn't emotionless. 3. My writing style is slow-paced. I like to take my characters on a journey in which they change and develop, and not make them with a complete personality. He is young and he will be shaped according to the interaction of the events that will take place with his base personality and mentality. I wrote this review mainly because of people's impatient comments "he isn't a villain, he likes his parents". First, mass murderers can love their families and still be considered villains. Second, be patient and let the story unfold. It doesn't make sense to make a young MC with a complete personality right off the bat. Thanks to all the readers who have been supporting my novel <3
One Wish to Own the World
Railvas
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he learns about the way cultivation works from existing sources and combines all his knowledge to create better original manuals and techniques. it happens throughout the whole novel since the beginning, and it's one of the main themes in the novel
Ghost_Playing:One question, does he create his own cultivation techniques/manuals and martial arts or does he just go around looking for better things like most mcs do?
Thanks for your quick answer since this is something that I look especially after since the usual way is very boring and predictable. Anyway, last question: Is this harem and if not is there romance?
Railvas:he learns about the way cultivation works from existing sources and combines all his knowledge to create better original manuals and techniques. it happens throughout the whole novel since the beginning, and it's one of the main themes in the novel
I don't write harem novels. as for romance there isn't any atm, hence no romance tag, but I dislike promising things.
Ghost_Playing:Thanks for your quick answer since this is something that I look especially after since the usual way is very boring and predictable. Anyway, last question: Is this harem and if not is there romance?
can you create a new story that is antiharem. story about a man that transmigrator into a reality with a heaven defining ability (cheat code) he conquers everything. when he reached the peak of his life. he discover another word Invaders a creatures from other realities. before the battle even began he was betrayed by his heroines then he discovered that all the heaven defining ability that he have. was given to him by the another invaders. with the last strength he has. he escaped the battlefield and fled because he don't have enough life force. but before he died he choose to create a system. a system that is going to help he's host to get more power so he use his having defining ability and the will of his own reality and other word reality. this is just the beginning of the story you can choose how the story will go and how is going to end I hope you like it this is just the creation of the system so you can make the system so overpowered please. antiharem please
shiro_WD_emiya:im not really into mc killing innocent buttt i really like mcs that is loyal and little paranoid so that they can survive
people really think fang yuan as emotionless, robot or something dude literally has emotions, even got loved ones, its just that gu world is so cruel that they are literally in a cage full of wolves scheming and tearing each other theres no higher realm wheres there bigger cage all they got is a small cage to fight into
completely irrelevant to my novel. I will just delete any further discussion regarding RI. my only point was that my MC didn't go through 600 years of struggles against the system, so he can't be Fang Yuan. That's it.
SnackFu:people really think fang yuan as emotionless, robot or something dude literally has emotions, even got loved ones, its just that gu world is so cruel that they are literally in a cage full of wolves scheming and tearing each other theres no higher realm wheres there bigger cage all they got is a small cage to fight into
you cant take criticism and your making a book? Sad truly sad i already know your going to delete this but ill just write it over again
Railvas:completely irrelevant to my novel. I will just delete any further discussion regarding RI. my only point was that my MC didn't go through 600 years of struggles against the system, so he can't be Fang Yuan. That's it.
RI is a different novel, and the reviews section isn't the right place to discuss it. I didn't delete any criticism written for my novel, and even made some changes in my novel following criticism i found justified. I didn't even hide it, and you can find me saying that I added paragraphs when someone mentioned that their criticism was false in a chapter comment.
SupXro_Xro:you cant take criticism and your making a book? Sad truly sad i already know your going to delete this but ill just write it over again
Railvas:RI is a different novel, and the reviews section isn't the right place to discuss it. I didn't delete any criticism written for my novel, and even made some changes in my novel following criticism i found justified. I didn't even hide it, and you can find me saying that I added paragraphs when someone mentioned that their criticism was false in a chapter comment.