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Review Detail of BookWorms007 in Life Of A Nobody - as a Villain

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I loved this novel initially. But as chapters went by, frustration began to build up. This novel is filled with info dumps. ( For eg: It takes about 10 chapters for the MC to transmigrate , About 40 chapters to get a system and awaken ) . Imagine a novel goes premium even before the MC gets his system/ hack. Also , the MC is a mess .He appears to be a siscon with mental issues pertaining to his unsavory past. A lot of chapters are wasted on his nightmares and internal monologues. I understand that as an author you have to properly flesh out characters. But don't you think it's too much????. Get to the plot already.The author could have tried adding the info dumps in between major plotlines. But rather he chose to provide all the info dumps at the beginning of the novel. Resulting in the plot crawling at a snails pace. And to top it all of, I hate the attitude of the system . Truly infuriating to see the system act all smug and high all the time . The novel gets boring way too fast seeing no real action or plotlines. Just plain old mc interacting with his family members.To give a perspective of how slow the story is, the MC started his training only at chapter 82. It took about 100 chapters for the plot to start .Sadly, this not my type of novel.

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Life Of A Nobody - as a Villain

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well can't argue with all that, so no need to give excuses, or trying to explain.. all I'll say is , this novel is supposed to be very very big novel. like a freaking big saga that branches outside and then explores its roots too. -- so i guess in regards to give hints for all their past and future, I stopped their present . and made. it slow