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author-San when doing dbz fanfic it is best to not give system or anything over powered the the power system in dbz is very powerful already you only need saiyan bloodline and ur mc good dbz is a martial arts manga/anime so it needs to be weak to strong with a slow burn otherwise if you just make ur mc insta op strong right off the bat what is the point of reading no stuggle,hardship and all that jazz

Saiyan Primal Ascension

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I'll keep that in mind, and no, I don't plan on adding a system.