Review Detail of Rimuru9Tempest in Danmachi: Honored One

Writing Quality(I Call Him Good Because It's readable ,Just Add more punctuations(.,""!?)and edit your typo error like(Aid? To«Ais») Story Development(I say it's rush you basically skip his adventures to lv1–5 so you ran out of ideas fast. ...And RECOMMENDATION FOR IDEAS(Movie Orario of arrow or something, It's basically Goddess artemis familia got devoured\killed by some formidable beast. .and she get devoured and assimilating by the beast to get her divinity. ..I say this idea is awesome because Gojo VS Sacred Beast «Because Of Artemis Divinity» so yeah you can also get her to get double romance💙💙💙❤❤❤ .....After This You Can make him a demi-God(LV#10 Adventurer)upgrade his space ability to the Multiverse Level to Multiversal hopping😁😁😁 Character Development (Cool . ...No Great Deviation Like Some Goddess\God Is Chinese Trope or I killed your son ,revenge of dad, I killed your dad, revenge of grandpa. and so forth. .. [img=recommend][img=recommend] Updating Stability(Meh So-So, Just Don't Drop It) World Background(Good Background ,Basically Danmachi«Is It Wrong To Try To Pick Up Girls In A Dungeon?» have potential for Multiverse) Ohhhh. 1 Last Thing My Power Ranking In Danmach; {LVL#1}≈Newbie {LVL#2}≈3rd Class Adventurer {LVL#3–4}≈2nd Class Adventurer {LVL#5–6}≈1st Class Adventurer {LVL#7}≈Hero {LVL#8}≈Champion {LVL#9}≈Spirit {LVL#10}≈Demi–God {LVL#11}≈God {LVL#12}≈Chief God\God King