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Review Detail of IINeeRoII in Supernatural: The Great Hunter System

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I loved your fiction so far. Especially that introduction, Synopsis or whatever you want to call it, where you explain what you want to achieve or how much you want to expand this Universe in terms of the beings or entities that inhabit it (especially the inconsistencies that exist in TV Show with respect to existences such as Angels and demons). It seems to me a point in favor since only with this little information we know what to expect from this reading. Good vocabulary or Lexicon, and good use of grammatical rules. So far it is coherent and it makes sense what you are looking to express and you keep it interesting. You develop the characters properly (At least for now), you are quite meticulous and detailed from what I can tell when describing situations, places and interactions between characters (This last one surprised me a bit) PD: One is so used to the garbage that is uploaded on this site with wish fulfillments and similar things that one generally does not expect to find good fiction. So I admit that I was surprised to find something like this. I wonder if the quality will maintain or if this story will be abandoned as it usually happens. [Google Translate]

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