Review Detail of Chaddts in Naruto What if: That Time I Got Reincarnated as a Useless Pink Banshe

This is horrible. The writing is so bad that the Yellow flash is written as "yelow flesh" though- tho, and many many other misspellings. This hasn't been proofread at all and is painful to read. reincarnated as a baby, but it timeskips every other paragraph, it's been months and we haven't had any interaction with the father or mother. It's very rushed. It's a fun concept but not executed well at all.