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Review Detail of Rudra_Khatri in Miracle Card Shop: All My Cards Can Be Actualize

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Rudra_Khatri
Rudra_KhatriLv310mthRudra_Khatri

amazing story and extremely well written until a certain point. the world building is great, but author made a few mistakes which led to more and more.spoilers ahead So, if you wanted to give him profession card, make it so he can only have one profession at a time or something to reduce the OPness. make the world larger by adding realms so even if hes's overpowered it can be enjoyed.you see the problem starts at the time when Card shop just closes and for another 50 something chapters that I've read it doesn't open. while closing it is a short term solution it takes away the most valuable part of the story that is the Card System. It gets extremely boring after he loses access to Card Shop as after that it's just him having ancient knowledge and stuff and creating things. also adding the daughter was just .. nah. like I do not hate it just it's too early and on tip of that continuously writing Slice of Life and Business novel... that's just wasted potential. The battles also become boring because he no longer needs cards and can just fight experts beyond top level easily and he doesn't even use the legendary card summons like the Amazon Queen or Michaela. But the worst part is all the business talk which is so boring that at this point i just skip it.

Miracle Card Shop: All My Cards Can Be Actualize

RavenClaw471

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Rudra_Khatri
Rudra_KhatriLv3Rudra_Khatri

Yeah, Thought I wrote it at C154 and after just 6 chapters the shop fid reopen so I think the story will become better again.

RavenClaw471:Thank you for your input. I'll try to solve it.
RavenClaw471
RavenClaw471AuthorRavenClaw471

Thank you for your input. I'll try to solve it.