Review Detail of Endurmar in Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

The writing quality is good. However, there are sometimes spelling and grammatical mistakes. This is an AU story, so there are quite a few differences from the source. The author needs to work on consistency with his characters traits and emotions. I personally do not like how the main character has been turned into a whinny little bitch. with a migrated soul and knowledge, you would think he would be more mature and less inclined to mental instability. This review is posted after reading chapter 60. I will update if he improves at all.