Review Detail of SHADILLAC09 in Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

This is a fantastic fanfic!! Read this if you enjoy character growth, If you like watching the world warp with the insertion of the OC and if you like a reasonably OP MC. If I could give the author a critique it would be to PLEASE stop writing author notes. You always spoil your own story in the author notes, and it is frankly kind of annoying. If the MC fights with his friends, you mention in the Author notes that it's not the end of the friendship, which leads to me sitting there waiting for the chapter where they make up even if it's not close. The suspense of whether he would get his friends back is just robbed from me. Now I understand that I could just not read the Author notes. Unfortunately, I listen to my fan-fics through text to speech while I work on other things and unfortunately I cannot exclude the author notes so I just get more and more upset with every spoiler in the author notes. Another example is when you immediately told us that Hermione is not the love interest when he starts to get close to her. Even if a decision you make in your story would make me angry or make me feel complicated emotions, you should rejoice at that. It means I am invested. Dont feel the need to justify every single decision you make in the comments. Let your story speak for you.