Review Detail of Stormzz in Memoir of The Forgotten Hero

The story starts and we're introduced to what I assume to be the MC. He makes an immediate strong impact on the reader, before the story begins to develop. The setting is established well enough for the short current length, and it makes the reader feel like they know enough about the world at that point. As someone who doesn't really care about vulgarity, the only complaint that I have is that there seems to be too much needless swearing. But what I personally dislike won't be what others do, and it definitely fits the world.