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tom123456
tom123456Lv311mthtom123456

I hate novels falling in quality over time, Dark (good) start with 4,9 out of 5 But then a miserable combination of a slice of life in the academy and dark begins, and the protagonist abruptly becomes dumber(a coward lets go of an enemy at the expense of a friend). And the development of the story is super long and just infuriates. 1 out of 5 the most offensive I really liked the initial setting

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Arcane Academy: The Divine Extraction Legacy

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Lv14

I agree on he doesn't have background or someone backing him up. But dose he need to kill a 14 year old for that? I just feel author could have made another way to deal with it.

Zen_Fay:The Mc doesn't have that much of a background or backup. And if the Mc wants to be free of the academy later he needs to accumulate more favors from the head master
tom123456
tom123456Lv3tom123456

finally, i dropped, MC and system are trash

Reborn_Killer
Reborn_KillerLv3Reborn_Killer

U mind explaining why?

tom123456:finally, i dropped, MC and system are trash
tom123456
tom123456Lv3tom123456

the system is weak, uninteresting and not developed (and rarely used), I think that the darkness of the world does not go well with the academies. and when his dark spirit saves him in battle and wants to land his enemies, he stops him because he is afraid of being punished by the academy (although he has the director's favors)

Reborn_Killer:U mind explaining why?
Shivam_Thakur_1883
Shivam_Thakur_1883Lv11Shivam_Thakur_1883

yeah he become more socially dumb than average 13 year old brats who never went out of their castel.. It just annoy me ... and the worst is he getting into trouble due to misunderstanding which he never clarify cause he is fking dumb and can't say the right word... I mean why fight happen cause some young master things he is after his girl but mc never even tried to clarify....

Mohand_Mouloud
Mohand_MouloudLv1Mohand_Mouloud

Also, I never understood why mcs don't just try to clear up misunderstandings, which could save the mc 99% of novel problems...

Shivam_Thakur_1883:yeah he become more socially dumb than average 13 year old brats who never went out of their castel.. It just annoy me ... and the worst is he getting into trouble due to misunderstanding which he never clarify cause he is fking dumb and can't say the right word... I mean why fight happen cause some young master things he is after his girl but mc never even tried to clarify....
Kelvin_Ade
Kelvin_AdeLv4Kelvin_Ade

in the great words of Ryan George from Pitch Meeting "so that the story can happen"

Mohand_Mouloud:Also, I never understood why mcs don't just try to clear up misunderstandings, which could save the mc 99% of novel problems...
Zen_Fay
Zen_FayLv12Zen_Fay

Nah even if he clarified In that case the guy wouldn't have let go. He was jealous of Mcs talent and fame. And since the Mc is of a falling noble household. This guy wanted to crush him and get the some attention and fame.

Shivam_Thakur_1883:yeah he become more socially dumb than average 13 year old brats who never went out of their castel.. It just annoy me ... and the worst is he getting into trouble due to misunderstanding which he never clarify cause he is fking dumb and can't say the right word... I mean why fight happen cause some young master things he is after his girl but mc never even tried to clarify....
Zen_Fay
Zen_FayLv12Zen_Fay

The Mc doesn't have that much of a background or backup. And if the Mc wants to be free of the academy later he needs to accumulate more favors from the head master

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GregLikesBooks
GregLikesBooksLv4GregLikesBooks

I haven't read this novel yet(still deciding), but that forced scenario where they never try to talk and explain that they didn't want/know/like that stupid/idiotic girl in the first place is a big killer for novels in my opinion... it's like they expect you to have brain damage and just accept that someone would rather fight (possibly to the death) rather than just explain.

Shivam_Thakur_1883:yeah he become more socially dumb than average 13 year old brats who never went out of their castel.. It just annoy me ... and the worst is he getting into trouble due to misunderstanding which he never clarify cause he is fking dumb and can't say the right word... I mean why fight happen cause some young master things he is after his girl but mc never even tried to clarify....
Tsetth
TsetthLv14Tsetth

Us authors struggle with creating convincing plotlines a lot, so sometimes its just 'super easy, barely an inconvenience' if we create scenarios like this to kick start conflicts🤭

Kelvin_Ade:in the great words of Ryan George from Pitch Meeting "so that the story can happen"
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