First off, the writing is superb. Not many mistakes, good use of language. I believe I have a wide vocabulary and yet I still found some new words to add. However that’s where a problem arises, the language is a bit complex, barring a lot of readers from understanding completely what a sentence is describing. The story starts out sort of slow, nothing really eye-catching that draws you in, but the descriptions are nice and allow you to picture the scenery. There is a little mystery sprinkled in throughout the chapters starting from chapter 2. Nothing too crazy but certainly present. I believe there is potential to this book, and if you are patient enough, it could be a wonderful read
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