It’ has potential but it doesn’t read like a story more like and overview of what could’ve been a good story there are no firsthand interactions I.e. you say he picked up a dragon egg but never describe it it’s more like continual background information rather than a story and the story develops too fast and all relationships are just glossed over this is a good story idea but the execution leaves a lot to be desired
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